"Militarized" This Hazard doesn't exist
"noticably battle worn, as a bullet entry point can be seen on the left temple"
maybe try:
"noticeably battle worn, with a prominent bullet entry point seen on the left temple"
"Service to the Crown doesn't end after death"
May i suggest changing "After" to "with"?
" the subject will begin undergo these changes before being declared an instance of RPC-XXX-1"
Maybe note down how long this transformation takes? 1 min? 30secs?
"Upon expiration," It'd be helpful if you mention ways of terminating these things.
" GOI-014"
GOI numbers aren't a thing, the lore team agreed on this months ago. Please remove it.
For the Item recovery report, maybe make clear this is from the APAS, not the Authority.
Not much criticism to give for this one, only thing i can really be concerned about is Anomaly usage in WW1, as we're still on the fence about if we're going to/not going to do it.
