RPC Authority

My first article on the site! The draft's very short, 700 words.

Link is gone because I've posted it! Crit no longer needed.

Pretty nice. As the creator of amazing co, I do have some criticisms. It's not really a GoI that's meant for straight up mind controlling murder. Though their products are defective, and usually cause it, the purpose of it is usually to be a product, but the result is something terrible, I think if this is to be an effective Amazing Co tale, you need to expand more on the psychedelic effects of the peppermint drug it would fit more in line with Amazing Co.

Regardless, that's just my opinion. I don't see any real problems with this draft.