Fuuuck
Okay, take two.
All incubator containing RPC-XXX
Think you mean incubators, fren
Following the termination, the brain of said subjects is to be removed and incinerated.
Wouldn't the Authority incenerate their entire body? The brain isn't the only part that carries the virus.
Personnel is to monitor the brain activity of infected subjects via specially designed REM scanners.
Think you meant are, not is
For a more clear and concise article, try to break the infection into distinct stages with time designations. (Stage one occurs five minutes after infection. During this time duhduhduhduhduh).
It may help even more to put the symptoms into a chart, with timestamps in another column.
Crystals inside the muscle tissue will attempt to root itself into the skeletons of subjects.
Themselves, instead of itself.
Evaporation causes the release of RPC-XXX inside the crystal, resulting in the infection of other human subjects.
Do the crystals themselves evaporate? Do they excrete something that evaporates? Perhaps have a section explaning the composition and physical features of the crystals. Chemical makeup, how it reacts when seperated from a host, how it reacts to heat, and how best to dispose of it. Things like that.
You can use this to explain how it keeps the host "alive" throughout the process as well.
Also, do the crystals ever stop growing? If they continue to grow after the host has been engulfed perhaps explain how it does so, or at least the researcher's theories on the matter.
Approximinally two days and seven hours later,
approximately
Not a bad article at all. Take your time to revise the text and tweak the concept. Like I said before, DM me before you get it published and I can help you further.