Chaos Theory:
Everything in the red relating to the recovery can be put in its own section after the Description, named Discovery:
Also if that is turned into hte discovery, it seems fine as is, but maybe for the description, mention carbon dating to give us a better window into when this was created.
"Upon completion, RPC-XXX was reduced to atoms"
How id they know that? Was it videotaped? Was he around other people? Did they use a microscope?
The incident log is really well paced and structured, however how about structuring it as multiple tests or a different log rather than a incident log. Maybe add a few different test logs, show people who were less than successful? Like maybe one showing someone losing interest, another showing
extremely destructive behaviour, etc.
And i know its scribbled out, but i don;t think this would've been white, maybe Yellow or Orange, but not white.
Overall this is a nice setting article for the main attraction, you could make this in a simple way by using 2 different number designations, or you could have this taking up one number designation and maybe have it concealing the next article as a decoy of sorts. This'd mean rewriting some of the log and a bit of the addendum, but it could work out in the long run.