Grammar And Tone
How about removing this word?
removed
I think removing the pronouns as well as switching to passive voice would help.
rephrased, and fixed issue
If it's slang, then it's to be avoided I suppose. This is a clinical article after all.
rephrased
Ok, I think this sentence needs restructuring.
…pending
Also, we don't refer to anomalies as RPCs in-universe to my knowledge.
removed "of RPC".
Structure and Lore
This is certainly some odd formatting. We also don't have a narrative hazard since the Authority isn't meta yet.
…pending
I suppose this is a translation from the Japan branch? Labeling objects "RPC-XXX" with nothing extra seems to be the established order here.
…pending
This would be "RPC-270", not "RPC-270-AP-NC". That's a bit too much.
I quoted original 270, done by Todd.
Content
Ok, I don't know what RPC-270-2 and RPC-270-3 are.
check quoted version.
The article also seems to fail at explaining what the anomaly is. I know that it's a person immune to stuff but that's it. If that's the anomaly, then it's not very fascinating.
…pending
Narrative
I don't know, the article kind of got a bit incomprehensible. I'm sorry.
…pending
Suggested Reading
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-722
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-916
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-068
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-137
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-286
http://www.rpc-wiki.net/rpc-532
These are not translated.