“aerator, natural gravel and optionally fish tank decorations.”
aerator, and natural gravel. Then In a footnote say that they can add the decorations if they want. “Researchers have permission to add decorations to the tank if they wish” or something similar.
“using steel preferably,”
Preferably using steel
“experience little difference in comparison with the highest recorded being 150.”
experience little change in comparison with the highest recorded being 150.
“Addendum: RPC-XXX’s fish tank has been installed with an auto-feeder, making weekly entry into RPC-XXX’s containment chamber unnecessary. However, the auto-feeder itself must be refilled every month.”
Doesn’t add anything could’ve been an auto feeder from the start. On a side note what happens if you drink it twice?
The grammar is good and the article is well read but the problem is the article itself. It’s a bit boring for a couple of reasons. Firstly it’s only the bare minimum it’s fine if you want to make a short article(I actually like short articles more then larger ones) but with a concept like this you can easily make an interview or test log maybe with a retard getting smart and speaking to a researcher about how he sees himself from the past now that he has intelligence? More importantly you really need to expand on the idea because at the moment it’s just “fish turn people smart” with really nothing to it. Maybe add side effects or make it inconsistent? And honestly this thing seems way to useful, a fish that turns you smart with no fuss or harm. Honestly I just noticed this whole thing is the bare minimum.