I was a little too antsy with the last RPC I uploaded, and the ratings have tanked because of it. I thought I was bringing something huge to the table, but the article is suffering due to my impatience. I now know that this is not a healthy mindset to have when writing for RPC, so I am deciding to revise the article; starting today!
http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/rpc-840
I fixed some of the errors that I missed on the main-site post, but I will continue to look over the draft and add my fixes when I get back home. The main purpose of posting this is so I can receive more crit, as the last post about this got archived already.
Any crit is appreciated. I will reupload the article (if it gets deleted) with the changes everyone suggests along with my additions and polishes.
EDIT: Current revisions: Fixed minor grammatical and tonal errors, added multiple addenda, fixed sentence structure, and added more footnotes and necessary information.
EDIT: Revisions complete. Currently awaiting crit.