First off, when making a poem like yours in the beggining, capitalize the first letter of each new line.
"dance I my last ball" idk what you tried to say here, but this is not a coherent word. Maybe "As i dance my last waltz"?
"her husband takes his last ball alone" Waltz again?
"Sincerely Your hearts Warden" Dont capitalize Your, and its "your heart's warden"
"As I turn the the page crying i see a message, and though i see the words I can't persieve them, All i can persieve is L'Academia de la vera arte at the top" comas, use them. dont capitalize "All"
"and as if a revelation i know where i must take these" Capitalize
"This is a pice of a poem in the Possession of the Academy of true art" Most of the time, when in full name, you refer to the academy as "L'Academia de la vera arte"
"The poet is a 18th century member of the Academy who died in 1830, at the age of 22" comas
"The cause of death were the bullet wounds from the soldiers of a small duchy in the Holy Roman Empire, whose duchess was angered by the poets rejection as he was already married to Veronica Rosenthal, the daughter of a minor noble of Holstein." was by bullet wounds* please use comas
"Adagio the friend and colleague of the deceased was responsible fir curating" for curating*
"Nonsense, we can still escape, the army is stuck due to the rain, we still have time! Proclaimed Adagio." comas
" Oh Adagio what would I do without you but unfortunately tgere is no escape" there*
" Heinrich you've got to stop thinking in hyperboles abd think with your brain" and, pls add comas, there are so much missing i dont have time to point out all of them
"there beyond the Horizon i saw them at least 1000 men galloping" capitalize first letter, decapitalize horizon
"His family were archivists fir the Academy" for*
Please proofread before asking crit, all of this could have been easily avoided by doing it, its cool as a concept, but it all fells like a rundown, idk when the poem ends and the talk begins, maybe try using some code to separate the two?? idk
