RPC Authority

On the outside, the facility shows a rather normal appearance, with signs of disrepair;

On the outside, the facility has the regular appearance of a recently abandoned building with signs of disrepair.

and possess a wide quantity of underground construction that expand about ██km.

and possesses a wide quantity of underground constructions that expand for
about ██km.

Further observations suggest that the facility could in reality be infinite.

If it might be infinite, then the above measurement is unnecessary, or you can say that the mapped area has a ██km radius/surface

as various operations undertaken lasted from 15 to 37 minutes, but operatives stated to have been inside the facility for even 46 hours

as various undertaken operations were measured to last form 15 to 37 minutes outside of RPC-XXX, but operatives stated to have been inside the facility for times lasting up to 46 hours

this has not caused altering affect on comms.

This trait has not caused any effect on the communications. (I am pretty sure comms are the actual devices used to communicate)

Their behaviour goes from docile to aggressive

Their behaviour ranges form docile to aggressive

Any detected RPC-XXX-A instance must be ignored or terminated in case of interference with the mission.

Operatives are instructed not to engage and agitate RPC-XXX-A instances, but are allowed to use their firearms in case of an open assault by an instance.

How has the facility acquired it’s anomalous properties is still unknown.

How has the facility acquired its anomalous properties is still unknown.

all contacts were lost

all contacts was lost

F4-Cap:Yep…ok then.

F4-Cap:Yep… OK then.

There’s no lights on…

There are no lights on… / The lights aren't on…

Right there with you boss.

Right there with you, boss.

Remember that the place is anomalous: do not interact with anyone more than required. Terminate him, we do not know what he could do.

I don't think Command would approve of instant termination.

Ok then command.

Ok then, command.

3, any signs?

Use Three, not the number

All addendums from now on form what is referred to as Operation Old Office, also referred to as 3O, triple O or “Santa’s laugh”.

Unless there is a particularly important reason to investigate the RPC, there is no reason to make a unique MST. Also, the document would not mention the unofficial designation if it is not allowed.

Old Office phase 1 logs.

Old Office, Phase 1 logs

The team assembled was

The assembled team was

:Those weren’t people, even if they did look like ones…we are supposed to kill them right?

How do they know this? Why are they instructed to kill on sight, when you said differently earlier in the article?

if the chances of them coming out are low we don’t want that.

if the chances of them coming out are low, we don’t want that.

elitè MST operatives re-assigned to the task force.

elite MST operatives, who were re-assigned to the task force.

Surely higher, but still low.

Again, why send MSTs on suicide missions when you can just post a guy with a gun in front of the building?

C24-1:We’re naked basically?
C24-2:Naked Snake…

cringe

One has a gun…9mm, 8 bullets.

Now they can apparently see the bullets in the pistol, alright.

which show an inhuman resistance to lethal damage such as headshots, lung perforation and trauma.]

Why was this not mentioned last time they did this?

I dunno if we’re ready fir that eventuality.

I dunno if we’re ready for that.

you give me an hand on this door?

you give me a hand with this door?

Why? You forgot how to open doors? Eh eh…

C24-2:That isn’t funny.

And what, nothing happens when they get to the door?
ADITIONAL NOTES:
-You do not mention whether A instances actually terminated, only that the MST is ordered to do so.
-A space goes after a colon. Like: This , Not:This
-The MST agents are oddly calm with what is happening
-Why was the agent with A instances? Why are they hiding?

Pretty shit, honestly. Just a generic infinity building with "people" in it. The MST logs are uninteresting, you do not describe the surroundings or the people, and it all feels dull. You should need an idea WHY the place is like that, who are the people, why would they want to leave, what happens When they leave… The whole RPC is full of plotholes.