RPC Authority

This article is based upon the following hazards

Invisibility, Temporal, Sapient

This article starts strong, but the tone gets weaker and weaker as it goes along. The later portions are also full of formatting errors, missing words, and French punctuation in places where English punctuation should be used. I would do more editing on this one, Todd.

or any type of light related devices such as night vision or ultraviolet light.

Very clunky, and unclinical

While RPC-639 cannot produce mass or generate inside the containment chamber, it can send radiowaves encoded

Generate what?

than an adult human, i.e animals and/or infants

Did the authority *really* toss a baby in there with that thing?

So, like many of the articles in this contest, I have to say you needed a few more rounds of critique and proofreading.

It starts off strong, then plunges into oblivion after the hidden collapsible. That segment needs a massive rewrite.