Minor Stuff:
Hazard Types: Memory-Alteration, Aggression, Grouped, Sentient, Organic, Regenerative
It would be nice to know why its crossed out, maybe put a footnote related to the Neutralization of this specific hazard?
Containment Protocols:
RPC-562 is still a large threat to operational security
RPC-562 still remains a large threat to operational security*
Webcrawlers deployed in the European Union
I think saying "Europena Union region" makes more sense, as there is also EU as the org itself, and I don't think thats what you going for
as well as Madrid Capital City missing persons that disappeared between 2001 and 2005.
as well as Madrid Capital City missing persons reports dating between 2001 and 2005.*
Findings are then to be reported to WESTCOM Protection Division authorities.
Any findings are to be reported to WESTCOM Protection Division authorities.*
As a final note, idk why there is a divider between the capture order and the rest of the containment section, it looks wierd and I would suggest removing it
Description:
Subject, hereon referred to as RPC-562-A, will claim to feel stalked by a single human figure every time they leave their house.
NOOOO NOT THE GANGSTALKING ANOMALY
Phase 3 RPC-562-A wear identical clothing
RPC-562-A instances? sounds better?
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Did these people do anything aside from having wierd theories that could might as well also be on /x/ to be considered a GOI? Beucase as far as you explain, they were a wierd, but not anomalous. online forum
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Did all those people talk in english despite being a spanish forum or did you miss to mention the follow transcript was translated?
I really like the real feel this forum threads have, you could also ask fucking proto to help you with the schizo posts ;))
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Assistance from these persons
individuals*
Hereby and to those concerned, we inform…
I think "To whom it may concern" sounds better
I really enjoyed this part, well made
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On the twelfth of June 2005
Why don't simply use the number? You've been doing that until now
Final Review:
5/5 a great article, very ganstalking
I really like the buildup and the way it portrais OI as a whole