This entry relies on references to the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy references rather heavily for the start of the article and in this commenter's opinion it is too obvious. Some subtly is recommended so that the article can lead up to the reveal that this is based on the aforementioned Guide. The rest of the article can't seem to decide on a joke. At one point it acts horrified about humans breathing air, another part tries to relay human courtship rituals in a humorous light but in this commenter's opinion these jokes fail. One star, as this commenter did not find it humorous.
I did smile at the attempt to use the Guide though, so isn't all bad.
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