"MST Operative Camp Vǫrðr-01"
might want to rephrase this to something along the lines of "MST Encampment" or something, since the wording is a little weird for a camp name (if that is what it is)
"within a mile"kilometer
"instead all members claiming to be the same title of "warrior"."
did the authority actually interview these battling vikings from the eleventh century? and how did they translate it? do they speak english/norse? an interview log would be neat
"Norweign" norwegian*
"We prayed for Tyr to guide us on our journey,"
so this is a little nitpicky on my part, however, perhaps tyr isn't the right god to pray to for a stealth mission? i believe tyr is the god of actual physical combat and brute strength, not stealth and strategy
other than those minor things this is a badass article, love the references to norse mythology, and overall there isn't much to critique