Containment, MST Deployment, Ship Port,
Was there more things meant to be listed after Ship Port? Or was there meant to be a period and not a comma?
As of ██/██/2016 Installation-45 was created with the purpose of managing the containment of RPC-139 this is the primary objective of this site.
Reword so it reads less redundant:
As of ██/██/2016 Installation-45 was created with the primary objective of managing the containment of RPC-139.
Secondary objectives include data storage for AUS and NZ regions and ship repair and restocking for any Authority vessels in the area.
Reword to:
Secondary objectives include data storage for AUS and NZ regions, ship repairment and restocking for any Authority vessels in the area.
45 is powered off local power with a 2-hour backup power supply. water is also supplied off local sources. Defence of this site includes 24/7 armed guard patrols (Basic uniform, taser, handcuffs, glock 19), a single security check point at the entrance and a small armoury.
Reword this paragraph:
Installation-45 is supplied from local powerm, with a 2-hour backup power supply. Water is also supplied by local sources. Defence of this site includes 24/7 armed guard patrols (Basic uniform, taser, handcuffs, glock 19), a single security check point at the entrance and a small armoury.
Once countdown has started only a level 4 or above can stop it.
Reword to: Once countdown has started, only Level 4 Personnel or above can stop it.