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JokahJokah 12 Dec 2018 03:29
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human resources looks cut off.

by JokahJokah, 12 Dec 2018 03:29

damn fucking straight deus vulte is head of biology.
ty legends

:^D by JokahJokah, 12 Dec 2018 03:27

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/installation-45
This is a draft for installation-45 enjoy.

installation-45 by LCPL CatLCPL Cat, 12 Dec 2018 02:46
Pwner1775Pwner1775 11 Dec 2018 23:21
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-119

You know I saw this on the scp wiki, directly copy and coldposted. Why isn't this deleted yet?

by Pwner1775Pwner1775, 11 Dec 2018 23:21
Re: New RPC
Agent StarAgent Star 11 Dec 2018 22:10
in discussion Writing & Drafts / Drafts » New RPC

In the protocols, you need a footnote or explanation for the soundproofing, or to explain what the leakage is, or how much soundproofing is needed.
You need some general English fixes like changing sentences to be more scientific sounding, for instance, when ever, being one word instead.
The incident log should have more formatting and have an event log style instead, something like:
[12:12:12] and a date if you want: and then the text of what happened at the time.
Humans are beta, especially if they can escape using an ability.
The last paragraph should be updated to say she's had this taken away, and probably that she's been deafened by earplugs constantly being used or always has a blindfold to prevent the same kind of incident.

Re: New RPC by Agent StarAgent Star, 11 Dec 2018 22:10

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/d4rkseid-thanatos

Hey guys, what do u think about this short tale/poem I wrote for the Nivaldi just to piece a couple things together and provide more tales because we have a lot of articles now. Let me know what you think!

Tale for Nivaldi Canon by d4rkseidd4rkseid, 11 Dec 2018 21:18

no antimemes, 1 star, and reported for racism

by moist breadmoist bread, 11 Dec 2018 20:36
VizloxVizlox 11 Dec 2018 20:35
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » RPC-600

2 stars

This article has a lot of tonal and flow problems for the first part.

It also doesn’t make much sense to me. Why would it not destroy the entire wing of the milkyway already? It touched earth, which is a part or the milkyway. It doesn’t make sense that it would cause this if exposed to the vacuum of space, because the vacuum of space is not a part of the milkyway. It is quite literally nothing, not part of anything.

The only reason I am not giving this a 1 is because I enjoyed the revelation that it could destroy the milkyway. It was a very nice “oh shit” moment.


How do I set a forum signature?

by VizloxVizlox, 11 Dec 2018 20:35

To save our mother Earth from anomalous attack/from the BEMs and Reptilians from out beyond the black./We'll unleash all our forces/we won't cut them any slack!/AEDF DEPLOYS!

AEDF! AEDF! AEDF! by Von PincierVon Pincier, 11 Dec 2018 19:49
Re: New RPC
moist breadmoist bread 11 Dec 2018 19:19
in discussion Writing & Drafts / Drafts » New RPC

"xiphos"

for retards like me, add a footnote explaining what this is

"he transformed into RPC-174-2"

it never mentions RPC-174-2 anywhere else before this, maybe do that

and maybe make the incident reports addendums

overall this is a neat little thing, do like it, just needs some touching up

Re: New RPC by moist breadmoist bread, 11 Dec 2018 19:19

Addendum: Analysis of the cat's underbelly reveal a message written in an invisible ink that read in Arabic, "Gathered close in tenuous firelight and uneasy companionship. This squalid comment, these corrupted lands, they are yours now, and you are bound to them just like me."

Sad Cat:
A stray cat, yellow in appearance, female. Noted to seemingly cry when exposed to audible 'cat puns' or 'treated as a cat' in a conventional "pet-like" manner. These events are almost always proceeded by further reports of small fires being discovered at near-bye locations after a short period of time. Consulted fire personnel are consistently unable to attribute a cause for these fires, suggesting that they are not initiated by conventional means. The consistency with which these events are reported to occur alongside each-other leave little doubt that they are in fact connected in some form. Whether this cat is somehow the cause of these fires or simply predicts them is currently still under investigation. Current testing involves exposure to audible cat puns within a secured environment with fire trained facility personnel stationed to cover the immediate surrounding area (radius of approx 300 meters around subject) in order to observe any potential spontaneous ignitions. Results pending.

MrPinesMrPines 11 Dec 2018 17:18
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Research Division

research4life

by MrPinesMrPines, 11 Dec 2018 17:18

"The other Divisions idolize geniuses and heroes; in contrast, every one of you is capable of matching our very best. I wish you luck, wherever you are headed."

This is wholesome and I like it alot.

by OkonkwownedOkonkwowned, 11 Dec 2018 14:04

Registered Phenomena Code: ΛΩΣT

Um no, this won't do. It's not a contest entry to warrant such a designation.

preventative measures

Preventive is more common, and an accepted way to put this.

Protocol Lazarus-Ereipio

Said protocol is never detailed throughout the document, it makes no sense to mention it on the "containment protocols" if you won't bother to outline it later on an addendum, which by the way is the section where it should be detailed.

Protocol Kasai-Perdido is as follows:

This is to be outlined on a separate addendum for itself, not here.

Protocol Spe Amissa

Another protocol not detailed anywhere. Leaving mentions of protocols like this makes your writing look sloppy, full of plot holes and rushed.

a quasi-metaphysical

Word sounds nice and like a big boy word, but not all your readers will know what this means. Put a footnote detailing what this means, it is done in scientific papers and so should be done in this article.

notions of matter, linear time, physical laws, spatial consistency, and reality.

Matter, linear time, spatial consistency and reality are all covered under the physical laws. So don't be redundant, and just stick with physical laws.

Matter that comes into contact with RPC-ΛΩΣT will be completely erased from reality.

Uh…no, the law of conservation of matter disagrees with you. This is taught in junior high, or even lower. Revise your physics before making such statements.

worshiped

Worshipped.

Artelixi, Church of Malthus, and Children of Nihil, among others

We don't have any official GOI going by Artelixi, and have you spoken about including the other two GOIs in this? Does this conflict with canon? Was this allowed by the Lore curators?

escape its self-imposed containment multiple times

Wait… this thing is Omega, and you said it can't be contained. Now it turns out it can't reliably escape its self imposed containment? This is inconsistent however you see it.

have caused, or at least contributed to the Big Bang.

It can't cause or contribute to the Big Bang if it erases matter from existence, since, well you know an explosion requires matter and energy. Revise your physics.

The second occurrence was during RPC-499, during which RPC-ΛΩΣT attempted to free itself by implanting a small "clone" within a pregnant human. The birth of RPC-ΛΩΣT caused a massive reality-destabilizing event, during which reality temporarily ceased to exist.

Besides the cliché of the birth of an abomination bringing end to existence, I recall reading something like this at a certain three letter acronym anomaly containing website we both know about. Consider removing this to avoid being accused of plagiarisms.

Due to an unknown force, RPC-ΛΩΣT was forced back into imprisonment,

It can't be forced back if the imprisonment was self imposed as you said before. Inconsistent writing.

RPC-ΛΩΣT is believed to have been contained within RPC-983 for the majority of its existence.

So, it was uncontainable. Then it was self imposed containment. Then it was forced imprisonment. Now it is contained within another anomaly. Inconsistent writing at its finest.

Safford-Treddough Omnipresent Reality Constant

Explain what this is in a footnote, it's an eponymous constant, this warrants a description of it on a footnote on all kinds of scientific papers.

MST-Omega-28 Mission Reports doesn't add any substantial background, it just adds more clichés and creepy sounding stuff just for the sake of adding it. It doesn't shed any light on the anomaly, nothing about its motives, nothing about its background.

Attempts to seize documents pertaining to RPC-ΛΩΣT in GoI custody are pending approval.

This has to go in the block quote above it.

In addition, the buildings surrounding RPC-ΛΩΣT were completely destroyed, with most matter immediately ceasing to exist upon contact with RPC-ΛΩΣT. Numerous appendages composed of a black substance were being utilized by RPC-ΛΩΣT to attack civilians. One rover was able to see a group of members of the Children of Nihil preaching to nearby civilians before being impaled by one of RPC-ΛΩΣT's appendages.

How can you be impaled when a touch can remove you from existence? Also these appendages haven't been described previously on the, well… description section.

You also don't detail what the Authority did to cover up such a huge occurrence. This is a plot hole needing to be patched.

Very uninteresting, plot hole and inconsistency ridden article. This couldn't possibly be taken as a decent 001 proposal due to all these flaws it has. With all the buildup you've done throughout the article you will leave a reader bored at best, and make a reader choose to read something else at worst.

Omega-Black? Check.
Shitty screw on the number? Check.
Demanding total control over the entire lore of the universe, including stuff like Nihil and Malthus? Check.

This is just as arrogant an attempt to write "THE ULTIMATE" RPC as I believed it was. The RPC community has no place for the arms race you're trying to ensue. You've created your own god so that you can proclaim hold over the entire RPC universe. And if you disagree with that, then why did you create something with ultimate power that demanded worship from everyone? Something that literally controls the universe?

No. We are a community above that. No to this RPC, no to anything like this. This will forever receive a 1 star from me. Nothing you do will change my mind on that. You don't get to proclaim that you can write this. No one should be allowed to demand that this is the alpha and omega, and that this is the being that has free range over the universe. And you have to have some massive arrogance to believe that you are entitled to write something with full control over the universe. How much of an ego do you have to think that proclaiming that something you've written controls the universe, and asking that 001 be opened up as a special place just for it.

No. No to everything about this RPC. For shame.


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No. by Dr Lobster EmperorDr Lobster Emperor, 11 Dec 2018 01:28

Loss with an Authority twist! It made me laugh. 0-J

by Pwner1775Pwner1775, 10 Dec 2018 23:43
if they want
SinaticusSinaticus 10 Dec 2018 22:57
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Operations

It here for people who want to tell stories in relation to Operations carried out by the RPC Authority.

if they want by SinaticusSinaticus, 10 Dec 2018 22:57
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