in discussion Writing & Drafts / Drafts » RPC-987 "Debt in the mirror"
I'm part of the people that consider RPC-XXX to already be -1, any sub-anomaly would start at -2
I'm part of the people that consider RPC-XXX to already be -1, any sub-anomaly would start at -2
http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/mr-gallop-s-scp-brainstorms
Been wanting to get this idea greenlit. I'd appreciate any critique and critiscm I can get, as I have received none on the Discord!
Thank you, and have a wonderful day and evening!
I find this pretty interesting, I like the idea of searching for more "Lucky Louie's" anomalous objects around the world, would be really interesting to have that name as an actual organization or company that was or is constantly working on luck-based objects, we could to things as simple as the things under horses' hooves, customs with a certain topic (imagine a closet with a bunch of costumes related to a certain topic and luck, maybe related to a real person!), or more complex things like a full casino where you can find that famous Louie where he is a kind of lord of luck.
I don't know, that sounds crazy and interesting in my head.
Will do.
Where is RPC-987-1? There's only RPC-987 and RPC-987-2.
Hey anon, I know I'm just some random fag on the internet but please listen. Depression won't go away out of nowhere, it might never fully go away, but there is so much you can do to make your life better. The first step to a better life is bettering yourself, miracles don't exist, so stop waiting for one. Start taking care of yourself, clean your room, quit caffeine, go to sleep at an acceptable time, start working out, find a long lasting goal, get a hobby, face your fears and stop giving a fuck, etc. The key to hapiness is to constantly work on yourself and be a better version everyday. You are the person in control, so shut the fuck up and take care of yourself, you pussy.
Thank you for the eggcellent crit!
I have applied some of this and am continuing to work on the rest.
I am making some of these changes and am still thinking on how to best improve the abstract without "spoiling" and of the later article. Thank you for the crit!
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Discord is having connection issues. Dunno how long till it comes back on. Shitpost thread time
Your prose and comprehension of how to convey the right feeling of dread throughout is something to be adored.
Thank you for blessing KK with this ungodly, unsettling piece of fiction. 10/5 stars.
Active v passive all over the place? It's kinda hard to write in a different style when you're used to novel-style 3rd person writing, but this is very helpful information to develop a new one in addition to the old. Thank you very much. This is exactly what I needed.
bagina-hed monster
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One of my favorite articles. Glad it's back. +5
oh yeah yeah
At first, I thought this was gonna be one of those funny haha joke articles that are in the main series because it still makes sense in the RPC universe, but when I read the later logs I almost cried. +5
pornstar-generating creature
I'm very curious how you came to that assertion. For posterity and future reference, what made you come to that conclusion. Perhaps, I had written something unclear?
Thank you for taking the time to read and critique.